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Vistronic
10-8-02, 12:43 PM
Hello ladies and gentleman,
Please check my new site and give me both pro/con if you have time. and for your trouble check out thank-you section for some free info on hot computer deals (I make no money on thank-you section) Also check my mega tags and Page titles.
www.makemoneynowwhywait.com or
www.infonetmatrix.comwww.makemoneynowwhywait.com (http://www.makemoneynowwhywait.com)

I tryed to make robot and search friendly.
Have a good day,
Vistronic
muijefr
10-8-02, 03:19 PM
I'm not much for .con sites but two free bees: first, use <blockquote> for your text rather than <center> and two, use some color or image in your <body>, you probably think it's a nice white or somesuch but it defaults to the visitors browser's background color specification, in my case an ugly gray. Did not visit the thank you section. Never know how much thanks can cost.
RE:

So I hope I am not coning anyone. I just was tired of spending all my time on net AND NOT GETTING PAID ANYTHING.

According to the number posted on your site you did not wear out your finger nails picking up pennies. Thanks for your kinds word about my site and yes it is somewhat different. I've just not been able to master making my site look like MSN's home page.
RE:Also why use block Quote? A <blockquote> will create a uniform body of text rather than the unpredictable stagers <center>ed text tends to produce. You can center a <blockquote> if that is a question.

RE: You may want to see if you can make graphic buttons for your menu so its visually pleasing and breaks up the space a bit.
Point well taken roggabrielle (you still have some letters in the alphabet that you have not used in your name...waste not won't not).
Vistronic
10-8-02, 07:24 PM
Thanks for advice I Will do it, actually I have used the products I sell at my site to build it! And I have tested them. So I hope I am not coning anyone. I just was tired of spending all my time on net AND NOT GETTING PAID ANYTHING.
My own interests are in Broadcast Engineering, it pays OK but I was hoping to make some money off net, anything to justify my time on it. The sites I have built for my self make nothing. check out http://www.geocities.com/vistronic/index.html for a fun site I made but again no money lots of time, that's ok though good learning experience.

Also why use block Quote? I understand background color.
Checked your site Impressive and different

Vistronic
roggabrielle
10-9-02, 01:31 PM
I think you need to break up some of that type... i know i lost interest as soon as i saw how much there was to read.
You may want to see if you can make graphic buttons for your menu so its visually pleasing and breaks up the space a bit.
gabrielle
http://go.to/jayde
Vistronic
10-9-02, 01:44 PM
Thank you I will try to do it! I am trying hard to make it user friendly I am even adding my OWN name and contact info. Per a Critique! Hey I do listen and read all I can here and else where.
Later
Vistronic