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komik
11-4-02, 02:00 PM
I made this for a customer of mine. And he is looking for some feedback on the site. I have tested it on N6 and IE6 but need some help with download speed stuff like that. Also just roam around and an overall criticism would be most appreciative.

Thanks in advance.

ATG Arizona (http://www.atgarizona.com)

TERRELL
11-4-02, 02:39 PM
Looks professionaly for sure.I went to services and sorta expected (in the tables) that the green text were links to longer explanations of that topic.The images you used on that page fits well.Easy navigation and reading.Looks very professional....Nice job Komik......

komik
11-4-02, 02:50 PM
thanks Terrel.......hey clean out your PM's so I can return them....It says it's full.....Delete some of them....

muijefr
11-5-02, 01:28 PM
A very straight forward business site, relevant graphics, clear mission statements, non-offensive color scheme. All of these are very good so what's to critique. Well, a few suggestions. You have a header nav menu, home page nav menu, and footer nav menu. This suggest the designer/owner either thinks nav is tres important or tres weak. I think a tres weak. I found myself mostly using the back button and the home page nav. I suggest, overall, the site is a great candidate for frames. You have the open left margin space for a frames nav menu, content that would be nicely rendered in a main frame, and it would eliminate the need for the other two nav systems. Multiple nav systems can be a pain in the bane. I know from experience. Lastly, the site needs something to initiate action from the surfer. I know you have a contact menu item, three of them, but I think for each nav page/service/function there should be a clear contact option. But if you used a frame menu, contact, might be more obvious.

clunsford
11-6-02, 07:37 PM
Overall it was a viewing pleasure. I am NOT a proponent of black backgrounds but you have done a fine jub of matching colors. My only beef is the left navigation on the main page. Lighten up the text a bit. Perhaps make it the same color as the grey in the center panels.