Online Portfolio Crit

[crummer]

Hi, my new powweb account is being used for my online art portfolio site. Please let me know how I can improve it ^_^

dontlookaway.net (http://dontlookaway.net)

[MinDBenNdER]

nice art work. i love your 3D sink. you should try a compressor to get the animation a bit smaller. 12 MB is a bit chunky.

i like your layout function, and your use of negative space.
only thing i would change is the orange. that shade is a bit to bright on a computer screen. i would dim it a bit, and get rid of the orange on the top and bottom, your not using it, fill that space with the rest of your cool background images.

were did you go to school for your 3D class?

btw: check out www.brokensaints.com (http://www.brokensaints.com) for the best anime cartoon online. trust me, it will blow you away. :cool: