A MorE HigH TEcH DesiGn...

[TERRELL]

Check it out...

Sporadic Designs Collage (http://www.raptalk.net/bb/attachment.php?s=&postid=137612)

[Bad Hair Day]

Originally posted by TERRELL
Check it out...

Sporadic Designs Collage (http://www.raptalk.net/bb/attachment.php?s=&postid=137612)
Sorry to say it, TERRELL, but it just made me think of fruit - Specifically, an Orange.

It strikes me as kind of, 'Monotone'ous.

:(

Perhaps a few contrasting highlights?

BHD

[TERRELL]

Thanks for the critique BHD... :)

[Bad Hair Day]

Originally posted by TERRELL
Thanks for the critique BHD... :)
You're welcome.

We've know each other long enough to allow us to take the gloves off...............

;)

Hey, my comments don't make me right, and I must admit I like the overall design.

Just had a closer look at it, and I think the large lettering and font grabbed my eyes first, and didn't let me take in the rest of the work, so I 'cropped' the header text, and it looked a whole load better.

:)

BHD

[Fire-Proof]

I like it a lot. I don't like the text at the top though. Just take that off and add it somewhere else not so big or anything.