three sites to see

[kkytbsnaa]

www.bobbyduncan.net

www.whiteheadfoodequipment.com

www.wschristianchurch.org

[Guy]

I looked at the Whitehead Food Equipment I like, it loads fast (but I am on a fast cable) the one thing I can say is it may be a good idea to use some rollover on the main buttons. All in all I like the site, its clean and easy to nav. Also in the text you say that it is best viewed at 800x600 res. I looked at it in a 1024x768 and a 800x600 and I think it looks better at the higher res, but thats just me. oh and also it looks fine in netscape 7 dont know about the other versions

[kkytbsnaa]

I tried to design it with non-browser specific HTML. Thank you for the compliments.

[YvetteKuhns]

Bobby, you look handsome in a suit! I also peeked at your profile, but I am already married. ;)

The links on your website to your other websites should open in a new window. Just include target=new in your "a href" tag. The sites you design load quickly, have a consistent layout and are easy to read.

But they all are look like they were made with an editor. That's okay, but they need a little tweaking to look more professional or eye-catching. I realize you are busy with your teaching job, hobbies and other responsibilities, but if you have time, look at related sites for comparison and ideas. Just trying to improve from good to better. (picky, picky)

I was disappointed not to find samples of your music to hear. Yeah, like you don't have enough to do! But if you have the opportunity to add music, let us know so we can revisit your site.

:)

[nickc]

First site doesn't really say much about what the site is all about and doesn't really grab the reader. The 2nd is better but still lacks a appeal. The 3rd is by far the most striking. Good luck with them all.

Nick

[kkytbsnaa]

The first site is my personal website.

The second site is a food equipment company in oklahoma city.

The third site is a newly formed church in oklahoma city.