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ssalo
12-23-03, 04:33 PM
i was just wondering if anyone out there would like to check out my site ..and tell me what you think...
http://www.dsisalo.com

thanks

BerksWebGuy
12-23-03, 04:56 PM
Uhhhh...can you host the kinda stuff on powweb...even though some would consider it 'art'??

But anyways...nice site, easy and simple. A few things:

- index page has no title (says 'Untitled Docuement')
- grey and red text can be hard to read on a black background...but my young eyes can take it...but many others won't
- popup images in a totally new browser window...maybe just make it a popup window with some easy javascript (no menu bars or scrolling...see my example HERE (http://www.berkswebguy.com/web/bar/pics.shtml) )
- Seems to be too much header space on top...alot of scrolling with 800x600 resolution
- Love the images and imagery...very nice.

Skunkboy
12-23-03, 05:15 PM
You may want to check with PW but I see noothing wrong with your site. It isn't like you're running a "for profit" porn site.

I agree that you may want to increase the brightness of your font. I can read it fine but someone with weaker eyes may strain - between the font size and color... either small and bright or big and dark (bad example but easiest one to think of).

I may consider rewording the part about "under construction." Just a matter of staying away from those two words. Nothing says you can't announce that you're always changing but the u/c phrase may shun some people away.

Other than that, good use of thumbnails, good sizing of screen. Professional looking site. I wish my site could be as simple as yours <G>... oh the days of years past... but that's the good 'ole supply and demand.

Good luck in your ventures.

Mirzabah
12-23-03, 05:25 PM
Sorry. PowWeb's no nudity policy means just that - no nudity :( This discussion has taken place many times on these boards. I recommend that you take down your nudes immediately or your account will be suspended as soon as the powers that be find it.

Nice site, though :)

Bannerzap.com
12-23-03, 06:56 PM
I think that your photogrpahy is very good, even though I don't particularly subscribe to Goth. You are quite an artist.

The site suggestions that have been previously mentioned would be a good idea to change.:)

FastCat
12-24-03, 09:52 AM
The images that are used as your wallpaper are simply fantastic.

When you click on one of your gallery images, it may benefit from showing the image in a controlled (pre sized) window rather than a seperate browser instance.

I Think the no nudity policy has it's place - but not on such an artistic site like this (though I may question the image of the hands being bound!)

I love it.

FastCat!

Mirzabah
12-24-03, 10:38 AM
Originally posted by FastCat
I Think the no nudity policy has it's place - but not on such an artistic site like this (though I may question the image of the hands being bound!)The strap-on dildo is also a bit of a question mark if you're claiming "art".

Mirzabah
12-24-03, 10:44 AM
Originally posted by Mirzabah
The strap-on dildo is also a bit of a question mark if you're claiming "art". And the tongue-on-nipple shot is pushing the boundaries TOS-wise.

Don't get me wrong. I don't have a problem with it myself. Not in the least. But I guarantee you that PowWeb will.

blurchy
12-26-03, 02:08 PM
Dig Your Site Dude

mjp
12-26-03, 04:30 PM
As Mirzabah has pointed out, PowWeb policy doesn't allow for any nudity. It's very specific so as to avoid debates over "what is art?" or "what is pornography?" There is not a concrete answer to those questions, hence the policy.

The majority of web hosts have similar policies, and they aren't necessarily morality judgments, they are business judgments.

Croc Hunter
12-26-03, 10:16 PM
Ahhh Bugger!!.. I was to slow.. heh. The sites been disabled.
Remove the nudity ssalo and email support@powweb.com stating that you have done so and want your site re-enabled.