tacimala
6-20-04, 01:19 PM
This isn't exactly a clear cut "I need critiquing for my site" but I didn't want to post in another section of the forum and have someone else get mad at me. OK here's how the story goes. St. Joseph, Michigan started a tourism project on Memorial Day Weekend. Much like Chicago's painted cows a few years ago, St. Joseph brought out horses painted and sponsored by local artists and businesses to line the streets of the downtown area. The sybmolism behind the horses is because of the carousel in the amusement park down at Silver Beach on Lake Michigan from many years ago. Now, to promote this project, the city has spent thousands of dollars on advertising by purchasing billboards, printing brochures and running text ads in newspapers within a several hundred mile radius. However, they definitely have overlooked the power of the internet as a good advertising resource as they only have a limited display on the city site.
Being that my site is a community driven website for the area and businesses in the area can advertise on my site, I took the initiative for the city and built a slide show and online exhibit of the horses and incorporated this into my site to help get some added PR and to give the horses a place on the internet to help drive tourism in the area over the summer.
Now here's where it gets tricky. Here is my page for Horses on the Beach (http://www.gokzoo.com/community/st-joseph/carousel-horses/). I developed the page so that it had a good amount of information for the user and also an easy to use slide show with some nice pictures of all of the horses. From what I know of search engine optimization, I did what I could to boost the page's rankings towards the top, but it didn't work as well as the other pages on my site. The questions I pose now for everyone are:
1) Can anyone see a good way to better optimize the pages for search engines?
2) Are the pages easy to use and well designed so that those viewing the site will have a proper browsing experience?
3) Going out on a limb here, but does anyone want to link to the carousel horses page to help improve PR? (I'm not asking for a link to my main page, but only to the pages for the horses so that the city may find them and take better notice.)
Thanks for reading folks, I know it's a bit long but I wanted to get the whole story down. I'm just trying to make this a great attraction for the area so any help from you would help out a lot!
Being that my site is a community driven website for the area and businesses in the area can advertise on my site, I took the initiative for the city and built a slide show and online exhibit of the horses and incorporated this into my site to help get some added PR and to give the horses a place on the internet to help drive tourism in the area over the summer.
Now here's where it gets tricky. Here is my page for Horses on the Beach (http://www.gokzoo.com/community/st-joseph/carousel-horses/). I developed the page so that it had a good amount of information for the user and also an easy to use slide show with some nice pictures of all of the horses. From what I know of search engine optimization, I did what I could to boost the page's rankings towards the top, but it didn't work as well as the other pages on my site. The questions I pose now for everyone are:
1) Can anyone see a good way to better optimize the pages for search engines?
2) Are the pages easy to use and well designed so that those viewing the site will have a proper browsing experience?
3) Going out on a limb here, but does anyone want to link to the carousel horses page to help improve PR? (I'm not asking for a link to my main page, but only to the pages for the horses so that the city may find them and take better notice.)
Thanks for reading folks, I know it's a bit long but I wanted to get the whole story down. I'm just trying to make this a great attraction for the area so any help from you would help out a lot!