jerome-petersen.com - please critique

[spacemarshall]

just wanted a simple online presence for my space systems consulting work and personnal trainer/ wushu coach side biz.
please critique
http://jerome-petersen.com :cool:

[linnetwoods]

Don't know if it was the alarmingly bright expanses of Pacific Blue or what but I didn't enjoy being on your home page and couldn't really figure out the purpose of your site from anything I saw. Still I'm an old bag and maybe virile young men would latch on straight away and be turned on by the BLUEness of it all...

I didn't click on anything because the home page had taken a little while to load and it put me off finding out whether that was going to be the pattern of the whole site... not everyone has the latest equipment or ADSL - if you are targetting an audience that definitely will have these things then you needn't worry about that though...

[jatticks]

I'm not sure what your site is about or has to offer. I did see a girl with a american flag bikini, clicked on her and it asked for a password???
I think you should rethink the entire site, find a focus and go from there.