Critique my site

[azza]

ok i have just made my second website www.knightsheadquarters.com if you would like to see my first one its www.saltedgoatmeat.tk

well anyway knights headquarters is on our local rugby league team.
any feedback would be much appreciated.

[intelboy15]

looks nice, a lot more polished than mines. good job :)

[Marko Peric]

While the looks is fairly polished, my first reaction is "Whoa, red!" It's really, really, really ridiculously red. It's red to the point that it hurts my eyes a little bit.

At the bottom you have repeating messages, and one of them, "Where going to show you what leagues all about?!" is spelled wrong (should be we're, not where). And what's with the ? and ! together?

That's minor, though. I strongly recommend changing the red background.

[linnetwoods]

aargh! loud red and blue and lots of whirly bits... should your site carry an Epileptics Beware! notice?! Only (half) kidding... I'm going to leave the critiquing to the men, the boys and the psychiatrists... indoor cricket and outdoor rugby are all right for young women, I'm sure, but this old bag is from a gentler age, when young gals sat demurely embroidering or discussing the merits of total submission, while their menfolk ran about outside, kicking inflated bladders for exercise and comradeship... Good Luck with both sites, anyway!

[craig6398]

I think there is too much blue used in this site it is overcoming the red concept, lose the blue and change it to red to keep everything toned down red wise.

Seriously now - chill the red down a bit, although that isn't what annoyed me about your site the annoying thing is i'm sitting here listening to a bit of eminem and then your music comes on so i have two choices turn my speakers off (no more eminem) or switch yours off but you have no TURN THIS MUSIC OFF button (bye bye eminem).

However all said and done you seem to have the content and everything works so 10/10 for that, i tried it in a couple of browsers everything seems to be in order. However it is not in compliance with W3C standards in order to make sure everything is going to work in other browsers stick to the W3C standards.

Follow this link to see your own site errors in the W3C validator:

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.knightsheadquarters.com %2F

You have 20 or so which isn't much i checked mine the other day and had 227 errors so your doing well.