Tribal Herbs - tribalherbs.com

[tribalwords]

www.tribalherbs.com (http://www.tribalherbs.com)

Critique please

Allen Campbell
Tribal Herbs - Plants & Seeds of the Ages (http://www.tribalherbs.com)
AKKA Paradise - Portfolio/Services (http://www.akkaparadise.com)

[adampear]

Before anything, the site needs some kind of text to make it clear what it's about when visitors arrive. There's no information at all.

Even if visitors are willing to dig about to find what it is about (which, sadly, they probably aren't), there's no clear indication of where they can find this information.

HTH
A
www.pgelanguage.com

[ryanchurchill]

No color and intros suck

[tribalwords]

any more people willing to critique the whole site? The intro does have a skip intro button for those that do not wish to entertain themselves with the intro. The i2.html page which is next, includes the image map and many buttons to click that open in the iframe in the center of the image map. If a user is not smart enough to use the image map, they are able to scroll down and have links to click below, including products that are sold in the retail catalog. I guess I could include more company info on the i2.html or do you think that this is unncecessry?

Critique http://tribalherbs.com/akka/tribalherbs/retail/catalog/ .. anything i need to add or change about this?

Thanks
Allen Campbell
Tribal Herbs (http://www.tribalherbs.com/retail/catalog/) Plants & Seeds of the Ages
akka paradise (http://www.akkaparadise.com)Portfolio / Resume / Services Offered

[Kitchensink108]

Overall layout is decent.
The banner gradient doesn't fade well, you can still clearly see the edges.
The text in the product spotlight section is hard to read on top of the images.
You title looks like a keyword meta tag. Make it useful to the visitor, not the search engine.
Text size of the bottom nav doesn't need to be so big.
There's a lot of white space between the banner and the text beneath it.

It might look better if utilized borders and background colors a bit, to liven things up and separate the areas of the layout better (mainly the actual layout from the white space shown in mid-to-high resolutions).

Your popup windows aren't sized correctly, at least in Firefox.

Organize the product index nav thingy at the bottom of the page. You might consider dropdown / pop-out menus to save space, but I suggest making this nav a more central part of your layout.

[tribalwords]

re-critique the home page. www.tribalherbs.com (http://www.tribalherbs.com)

Thanks
Allen Campbell
Tribal Herbs (http://www.tribalherbs.com) Plants & Seeds of the Ages
akka paradise (http://www.akkaparadise.com)Portfolio / Resume / Services Offered