check it out please.

[chuck456]

http://laser-inked.com/

[YvetteKuhns]

The home page should be much more attractive and descriptive to define your target audience. I had to click Contact Us to see that you are in Ontario, Canada. Your home page should say you tattoo people in Ontario, unless you plan to travel to your clients! ;)

Also, you need to explain accepted forms of payment and other helpful info. You are also selling products. This is confusing to me. You may want to separate your product store from your tattoo pages.

Your web page file names are not descriptive. If you hope to get found on search engines, consider renaming the pages. You need a more professional, attractive logo. I could say more, but I think I will just recommend that you look at other websites for comparison.

[chuck456]

thanks

[YvetteKuhns]

Sorry for beating you up like that. Most people will judge your site and will either stay or leave without telling you why.

Feel free to make changes and post again. I can't post example sites here, because most of the tattoo sites contain pics or links to porn. Well, here is one: http://www.tattoofactory.com . Notice what information is included on the home page and elsewhere.

[chuck456]

im not upset, i'am just saying thanks for your honest opinion,it's hard to get one nowadays.

[YvetteKuhns]

If you read some of the other posts, you will see why. Some people ask for our opinions, but they get upset when we give them. Some people are looking for praise and recognition instead of constructive advice to improve a website. I always give an honest opinion. It wouldn't be helpful to anyone not to do so.

[Kitchensink108]

Lately I haven't been critiquing code, but I think Yvette covered everything else. Your markup is a bloated. It would pretty simple to get the same result with half the code.

[YvetteKuhns]

I don't bother picking on source code for newbies. They are still in the design phase. ;)

[YvetteKuhns]

You rang?

I knew YOU would point out those errors! I hate site builders and bloated code.