Finally! work is done! Review please

[MISOA]

Finally! work is done! :eek: Review please http://digital-photo-retouching.com (http://digital-photo-retouching.com/)

[Doc C]

This is a non PowWeb hosted site. Please refer to this post (http://forum.powweb.com/showthread.php?t=49943) on the proper way to submit a site not hosted here. It is a sticky post located at the top of this forum.

Thank you.

[MISOA]

I'm sorry. My head is't work

[Doc C]

No apologies needed, MISOA. It just makes it easier for people to give help because some things that work on PowWeb sites might not work on non-PowWeb sites.

[phlembol]

It is obvious that English is not your first language. There are many places where things are not worded right. "Give me, please, short order guide." "On your e-mail the letter with the notice that your order is accepted to consideration will be sent." Don't take that wrong, I am not xenophobic, but I might wonder how good communication would be if I had specific detailed requests.

I didn't get to a payment page but I noticed there was no secure connection during sign-up.

You don't convince me that my payment is handled by a respected agent.

You say, "How to make order? It's EASY!" but then you give me a 10-step program where everything runs together. They should be easier to scan and/or shorter.

The service offered seems ok, price isn't bad, some of the examples could be better. Interesting. Good luck.

[Kitchensink108]

I think the topnav is a bit eccentric. It'd be better if the tabs were a bit smaller (like 30px tall). I also suggest making the Login box smaller, first by making the font smaller, then possibly by putting text "password" on the same line as the password box (same for the username box).

The majority of your links are default-style (color:blue, text-decoration:underline). Even if you change the style just a bit, it'll probably look a lot better. The default styling just bothers me a lot.

The text at the bottom of the main page is really easy to miss. You have to scroll down past the "we offer you" bullet points and two sets of image examples, which is quite a length to scroll. You might want to work with this and make it so the examples are hidden and you can click to show them, or put the text between the two sets of examples, or something like that. I also don't like the double-spacing of the text.

I agree with phlembol that the text isn't worded well. I tried rewriting it here:
People's lives are full of events we wish to always remember, memories we wish to share with friends and family. Photography accomplishes this for us, giving us the ability to capture anything we see with our eyes - people, animals, architecture, landscapes and more.

We bring to life photos of friends, nature, etc. At times you may only want a photo to be more decorative, be it by framing or adding details. In other circumstances, there may be major problems detracting from the picture's quality or worth. These could be skin defects, objects in a bad location, or general lighting problems. We can help you fix these problems, so you can enjoy the photograph to its fullest.

We can retouch or decorate your photos. You can choose specific changes or trust the judgment of our designers. View our gallery for examples of our work.There were some lines that I really couldn't understand what you were trying to convey, so I kind of guessed in my version.

The banner could use a bit of work. The only thing I don't like is how you have the image on the left, then for 200px you have absolutely nothing, then you have the banner text. It's a bit disjointed, and if you could find a way to connect the two top elements a bit better, it would really improve the page's looks.

The only other thing is that the Links box looks kind of out of place. It's like a 200x75 box dedicated to a single link, which is simply titled "Links." I'd either add more links there, or put the "Links" link somewhere else.