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3-20-03, 03:59 AM

lemme know what you think about my design....thanks ahead of time.

withhope.com

Jo-Bizz · 3-20-03, 10:14 AM

hey it looks good! Nice graphics. I think you could make it clearer what the purpose of the site it (what is it? a place to talk? a place to review music? is it a personal site? is it part of an organization?). I was trying to figure out what religion you were presenting, or if it was just a fuzzy feel good site. I saw LaRue on there, and I was like.. hmm ok? christian?

The colors look great; it all looks really professional. I guess this is just me, but I wasn't all that effected by the text describing each page/forum/whatever. It was using words that sounded good, but it didn't really tell me something I needed to know. It could all be more to the point. There are some typos, btw. You could also add alt tags to the images.

The design is fantastic though.....

Is this your own site, or did you make it for someone else?

Grymwulf · 3-20-03, 12:09 PM

Looks very professional and very well done. Kudos to you. The only comment that I could have was mentioned above, but since I dropped to source and took a look at your meta "description" I got the idea for what you where doing.

Jo-Bizz · 3-20-03, 12:24 PM

"We've got a lot to offer here and with the interaction of visitors like you, we hope to grow as a community with the additions of user submitted content. The main reason we're here is to provide people with thought-provoking material, as well as some fun stuff (ie media) "

I found that quote on one of the pages. That explains it a little better. I also found the site misson page, which helped too. Maybe those links could be more prominent? Just an idea.

Hey, why not include info on christian 'visual' artists or whatnot? I mean, you have gobs of info on musicians, and so do a lot of internet sites, i mean TONS of sites. Its really tough to find stuff on modern christian art. Except of course, Thomas Kincade :P

3-20-03, 03:59 AM	#1
chadbo Posts: n/a	let me know lemme know what you think about my design....thanks ahead of time. withhope.com

3-20-03, 10:14 AM	#2
Jo-Bizz me Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: here Posts: 112 Reputation: 5	hey it looks good! Nice graphics. I think you could make it clearer what the purpose of the site it (what is it? a place to talk? a place to review music? is it a personal site? is it part of an organization?). I was trying to figure out what religion you were presenting, or if it was just a fuzzy feel good site. I saw LaRue on there, and I was like.. hmm ok? christian? The colors look great; it all looks really professional. I guess this is just me, but I wasn't all that effected by the text describing each page/forum/whatever. It was using words that sounded good, but it didn't really tell me something I needed to know. It could all be more to the point. There are some typos, btw. You could also add alt tags to the images. The design is fantastic though..... Is this your own site, or did you make it for someone else? __________________ He is not a tame lion

3-20-03, 12:24 PM	#4
Jo-Bizz me Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: here Posts: 112 Reputation: 5	"We've got a lot to offer here and with the interaction of visitors like you, we hope to grow as a community with the additions of user submitted content. The main reason we're here is to provide people with thought-provoking material, as well as some fun stuff (ie media) " I found that quote on one of the pages. That explains it a little better. I also found the site misson page, which helped too. Maybe those links could be more prominent? Just an idea. Hey, why not include info on christian 'visual' artists or whatnot? I mean, you have gobs of info on musicians, and so do a lot of internet sites, i mean TONS of sites. Its really tough to find stuff on modern christian art. Except of course, Thomas Kincade :P __________________ He is not a tame lion

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3-20-03, 12:09 PM	#3
Grymwulf Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 124 Reputation: 5	Looks very professional and very well done. Kudos to you. The only comment that I could have was mentioned above, but since I dropped to source and took a look at your meta "description" I got the idea for what you where doing.