www.liquid-vitamin-supplement.net

wellzy · 5-27-04, 03:09 PM

Looking for some critique on www.liquid-vitamin-supplement.net. Tried to keep it simple. Thanks in advance for any suggestions.

5-27-04, 06:03 PM

yes i think it does the job,not a lot of color but its a medical type site so white is cool i guess, seems easy to navagate around looks ok to me

YvetteKuhns · 5-27-04, 06:09 PM

I created a similar site for one of my clients. These products are plentiful and the descriptions for use are tricky, since the FDA is very fussy about the definition of a drug or explanation of use of products.

The design is easy to read and navigate. The contents are well planned and informative. The Order link goes to the Awareness website on another server (obvious since it is in Cold Fusion and PowWeb does not support it).

There are no pages to explain more about the company, privacy, refund or payment information or contact information. Most people would not want to buy from a site that does not include this information, even if you are a distributor.

When I clicked the Herbal Info button on your home page, I saw a list of Herbs and clicked Echinacea. The link opened in a new window instead of the same window. There are underlined words that are not links and there is no order button to make the purchase from the page.

The previous page had no order button and I had to go to the original page for an order button. But that just links to the main page of the Awareness Life website instead of a shopping cart. And the link opened in the same window instead of a new one. From there I would click USA and still did not see the product of choice. Seems like alot of clicks to buy a product.

This site may be okay for info, but not for purchasing. Try to make the ordering process EASIER.

wellzy · 5-27-04, 07:18 PM

Yvette
Thank you. That's the critique I was looking for. I have made it more order friendly. I have the order buttons on almost every page (where it makes sense). I have also fixed the link to go to the appropriate product. I'm not done yet, but getting there.

Thanks for the suggestions. Anything else anyone would change?

wellzy

rnorth6920 · 5-31-04, 01:24 PM

It doesnt look bad at all, but does look like a site that sends out spam emails..such as viagra or other stupid drugs that probably dont even work.

wellzy · 5-31-04, 11:36 PM

I don't do spam e-mail campaigns. Just looking for crtique on the site design.

wellzy

YvetteKuhns · 6-1-04, 01:56 PM

I still see pages that need the order button links corrected to go to the specific product. See http://www.liquid-vitamin-supplement...le_balance.htm to see that the green horizontal lines do not appear in the correct places.

5-27-04, 03:09 PM	#1
wellzy Registered Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Virginia Posts: 24 Reputation: 5	www.liquid-vitamin-supplement.net Looking for some critique on www.liquid-vitamin-supplement.net. Tried to keep it simple. Thanks in advance for any suggestions.

5-27-04, 06:03 PM	#2
boblob Posts: n/a	looks good yes i think it does the job,not a lot of color but its a medical type site so white is cool i guess, seems easy to navagate around looks ok to me

5-27-04, 06:09 PM	#3
YvetteKuhns Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Allentown, PA USA Posts: 14,885 Reputation: 447	I created a similar site for one of my clients. These products are plentiful and the descriptions for use are tricky, since the FDA is very fussy about the definition of a drug or explanation of use of products. The design is easy to read and navigate. The contents are well planned and informative. The Order link goes to the Awareness website on another server (obvious since it is in Cold Fusion and PowWeb does not support it). There are no pages to explain more about the company, privacy, refund or payment information or contact information. Most people would not want to buy from a site that does not include this information, even if you are a distributor. When I clicked the Herbal Info button on your home page, I saw a list of Herbs and clicked Echinacea. The link opened in a new window instead of the same window. There are underlined words that are not links and there is no order button to make the purchase from the page. The previous page had no order button and I had to go to the original page for an order button. But that just links to the main page of the Awareness Life website instead of a shopping cart. And the link opened in the same window instead of a new one. From there I would click USA and still did not see the product of choice. Seems like alot of clicks to buy a product. This site may be okay for info, but not for purchasing. Try to make the ordering process EASIER. __________________ Yvette Kuhns Power Pages Web Design Customized Internet Advertising Solutions

5-27-04, 07:18 PM	#4
wellzy Registered Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Virginia Posts: 24 Reputation: 5	Thank you...more suggestions? Yvette Thank you. That's the critique I was looking for. I have made it more order friendly. I have the order buttons on almost every page (where it makes sense). I have also fixed the link to go to the appropriate product. I'm not done yet, but getting there. Thanks for the suggestions. Anything else anyone would change? wellzy

5-31-04, 11:36 PM	#6
wellzy Registered Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Virginia Posts: 24 Reputation: 5	No spam here I don't do spam e-mail campaigns. Just looking for crtique on the site design. wellzy

5-31-04, 01:24 PM	#5
rnorth6920 Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: KY Posts: 96 Reputation: 5	It doesnt look bad at all, but does look like a site that sends out spam emails..such as viagra or other stupid drugs that probably dont even work.

6-1-04, 01:56 PM	#7
YvetteKuhns Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Allentown, PA USA Posts: 14,885 Reputation: 447	I still see pages that need the order button links corrected to go to the specific product. See http://www.liquid-vitamin-supplement...le_balance.htm to see that the green horizontal lines do not appear in the correct places. __________________ Yvette Kuhns Power Pages Web Design Customized Internet Advertising Solutions

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